Welcome to my blog, I'm a student at Karoro School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
I have done a story about a Polish Refugee child.
Hi Rian, this is Rylan. I liked this because of the description in the story. This reminded me when our class read The Boy At The Back Of The Class. Maybe you could not use ,and, as much.
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.
Hi Rian, this is Rylan. I liked this because of the description in the story. This reminded me when our class read The Boy At The Back Of The Class. Maybe you could not use ,and, as much.
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