Friday, 2 August 2019

Web the spider

AO Integrate sources of information, processes, and strategies with developing confidence to identify, form, and express ideas I am learning to include visual information in my writing including images, graphs and charts. I am learning to revise and rework my writing for clarity, impact and purpose. I am learning to support my main ideas with important details.



Web The Spider Once

 I was a little spider named Web and I was in the bush with my parents. They are also spiders. Me and my brother were just climbing trees and having fun and when we got to the top we jump off and bungee jump using our spider webs. We sometimes go out of the bush and go into other people's houses and try and steal their food because we are hungry. Or we just eat bugs. We are going to try and rob a house and get some food!. Me and my Dad go and we crawl through the vent and end up in the kitchen where one of the people are. We tried to sneak up and they saw me and caught me as a pet spider in a jar and squashed my dad!. I tried to escape but I couldn't so I was stuck until by brother came and he helped pull the lid of the jar and we pulled the jar lid of so I escaped. Just for fun we went and stole their food. The end.

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